I truly appreciate your positive feedback and will incorporate! I love this story and appreciated having a new set of eyes to strengthen it. Thanks so much!

Lindsey P.

Mona Voelkel

Thank you. Mona, for your very thoughtful, generous, and thorough critique. I appreciate it and found it very helpful.

Jill N.

Mona Voelkel

Leslie, Appreciate all the comments - very encouraging - I like the form filled out with positives.

Robin 

Leslie Eva Tayloe

Thank you, Mona! Good insights and food for thought with revision and/or new drafting.

Carrie T.

Mona Voelkel

Dear Leslie, I was so impressed by your critique of my children’s picture manuscript. It was encouraging and thorough. I appreciate that you shared “positive first impressions”; a synopsis of the plot; an analysis of the characters and plot, with specific suggestions on how I might take the story to the next level. You also gave samples on the manuscript itself using the “track-changes” tool. This critique was one of the most useful that I’ve received. Thank you, again. In community,

Candelaria

Leslie Eva Tayloe

Thank you so much Tarja! Your insights were very helpful today 😊

Amy C

Tarja Helena Nevala