I truly appreciate your positive feedback and will incorporate! I love this story and appreciated having a new set of eyes to strengthen it. Thanks so much!

Lindsey P.

Thank you. Mona, for your very thoughtful, generous, and thorough critique. I appreciate it and found it very helpful.

Jill N.

Leslie, Appreciate all the comments - very encouraging - I like the form filled out with positives.

Robin 

Thank you, Mona! Good insights and food for thought with revision and/or new drafting.

Carrie T.

Dear Leslie, I was so impressed by your critique of my children’s picture manuscript. It was encouraging and thorough. I appreciate that you shared “positive first impressions”; a synopsis of the plot; an analysis of the characters and plot, with specific suggestions on how I might take the story to the next level. You also gave samples on the manuscript itself using the “track-changes” tool. This critique was one of the most useful that I’ve received. Thank you, again. In community,

Candelaria